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考研作文范文之建议信

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发布时间：2017-06-20

建议信

Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting possible solutions

Dear Sir, 小白必看考研入门宝典-新东方主讲：王江涛、董仲蠡等课时：15 ￥0查看	称呼：写作关系不亲密的个人
As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory.	第一段只有一句话，包含了2层信息：自我介绍以及写信目的。（积累：It is my obligation to do…; make some suggestions concerning…）
Generally speaking, the dormitory building situates in a satisfying environment and is well-equipped. However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us: 1) the heating system is in need of improvement—it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter; 2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner –there lacks a shelf to place books.	第二段是提出建议及改进措施段。第一句肯定所述对象的优点，为后面的改进意见做铺垫。（积累：generally speaking， situate in…; well-equipped）第二句是一个过渡句，转折到写信的根本目的上：提建议。建议共分2条，通过序号列出。第三句提出第一条建议：改进供暖系统。（积累：in need of； fail to do…）第四句提出第二条建议：家具设计不实用。（in a practical manner）
I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.	第三段只有一句话，对信件进行总结，表达了期待得到解决的真诚态度。（I would be more than happy if…；take place ）
Yours sincerely, Li Ming	信件结尾和署名

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