一：开头

 

　　句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。

 

　　〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

 

　　〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

 

　　〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.

 

　　〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying.

 

　　二：经过

 

　　2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。

 

　　①强调句

 

　　〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.

 

　　〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.

 

　　It was yesterday that I met him in the street.

 

　　②由with或without引导的短语。如:

 

　　He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

 

　　③分词短语。如:

 

　　Satisfied with the result，He decided to go on with a new experiment.

 

　　④倒装句。如:

 

　　Only in this way can we achieve our goal.

 

　　Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.

 

　　Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.

 

　　⑤省略句。如:

 

　　If so，victory will be ours.

 

　　You can make some changes wherever necessary.

 

　　3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

 

　　〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

 

　　〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

 

　　〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

 

　　Some told stories. Some played chess.

 

　　〔修正〕After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。

 

　　4.学会使用过渡词。如:

 

　　①递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。

 

　　②转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等。

 

　　③总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)， in conclusion(最后)等。

 

　　④强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)等。

 

　　⑤对比: in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

 

　　相似的比较： similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,

 

　　5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:

 

　　〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.

 

　　〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

 

　　6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:

 

　　〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

 

　　〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

 

　　I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.

 

　　三、 结尾

 

　　1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……（比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.）

 

　　2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……

 

　　3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.（我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么）

 

　　4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……

 

　　5、 Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

 

　　一些用法：

 

　　1、 陈述个人的观点

 

　　It is alleged that(据说)

 

　　In my view, both sides are partly right(两方面都部分的正确)

 

　　As far as I am concerned(就我而言)

 

　　As regards to me

 

　　My own point of view is that……

 

　　Personally, I believe that……

 

　　My experience tells me that……

 

　　The invention of the handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.

 

　　The application of web sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.

 

　　It comes as no surprise that Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.

 

　　2、 陈述别人的观点

 

　　Other individuals, however, take the attitude that……

 

　　（错误的观点）sb is under the false belief that……

 

　　3、 图表作文

 

　　The table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……（表明、暗示、揭示）

 

　　According to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……（根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现）

 

　　As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed in the picture

 

　　Sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)

 

　　Sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)

 

　　A brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.
 

 

　　好的替代

 

　　the machine\the device 代替 computer

 

　　handset代替 cell phone

 

　　*The Middle Kingdom代替 China

 

　　intensely\crucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits of collective be on our priority.)

 

　　approaches代替 ways

 

　　current(currently) 代替 now

 

　　growing individuals代替 more and more people

 

　　individuals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons

 

　　positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 good

 

　　unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 bad

 

　　an army of, an ocean of, a multitude of 代替 many, a lot of

 

　　take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 代替 think

 

　　affair, business, matter 代替 thing

 

　　for my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion

 

　　beneficial, rewarding 代替 helpful

 

　　exceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 very

 

　　pour attention into代替 pay attention to

 

　　bear in mind that代替remember

 

　　enjoy, possess代替 have

 

　　to name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance

 

　　常用短语

 

　　老年人the old\elderly\ aged\ elderly population\ senior citizens

 

　　年轻人youth\youngster\ young adults\ adolescent

 

　　中年人middle adults

 

　　网吧cyber café 网虫mouse potato 电视迷couch potato

 

　　优秀的学生outstanding/superior/rare/top students

 

　　坏的影响ill effects

 

　　农村rural 郊区suburban 城里urban

 

　　在当代社会in contemporary society

 

　　双赢a win-win situation 双输 a lose-lose situation

 

　　建设有中国特色的社会主义build socialism with Chinese characteristics ,form a economic system with Chinese characteristics

 

　　写信中

 

　　I would appreciate it very much If you ……

 

　　I am thrilled to receive your mail.

 

　　Looking forward to a prompt response.

 

　　好的短语

 

　　1、 have growing respect for 越来越重视

 

　　Coincident with the fast growing economy, China has growing respect for protecting the environment and controlling population. 随着经济的迅速发展，中国也越来越重视环境保护和控制人口了。

 

　　2、 enable sb to do sth （使某人可以做某事）

 

　　It enable us to build a harmonious society.

 

　　3、 另外 In addition/ Additionally/ on top of that

 

　　Additionally, there is another reason for the appearance of this phenomenon.(现象)

 

　　好的句子

 

　　The real power resides in the people.(真正的权力属于人民)

 

　　We must fight against the bureaucracy in order to improve governmental work.(为了提高政府部门的工作效率，我们必须与官僚作风作斗争。)

 

　　Litter by little, our knowledge will be enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.(慢慢的，我们的知识会充实，我们的视野会开阔。)

 

　　As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.(常言道，任何事物都有两面的。)也可以用 every sword has two edges. Everything has both dark sides and bright sides.

 

　　Taiwan is an integral part of China.(台湾是中国不可分割的一部分。)

 

　　最简单的格式

 

　　Coincident with the fast growing national economy, there exists an unfavorable坏的现象 (favorable好的现象) and prevalent phenomenon in China. It is estimated that (相关数据，例如：eight out of ten individuals possess a handset十个人中有八个有手机了).

 

　　Why have there been so many (某种现象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly /in the first place (原因一). Besides,/secondly (原因二). On top of that/additionally (原因三). the main cause of (某种现象) is due to (最主要原因). It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, (解决办法一). On the other hand, (解决办法二). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of (某种现象).